"Suppressed by his loving
Yet torn by his pride."
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^^ Loved that stanza. Very creative. Completely mind blowing poem. Seems so intense and powerful. I love it! Take care.

Love,

`Poetess

Zomg! i love it ! i read that book in 2 days! have u read the 2nd one? i have its great! the poem is great! well written!!!! =] 5/5

Ok..yet again..very nice...i love your poems...5/5

Excellent detial, nice beat..rly good stuff