by ABake Dec 18, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
No longer will i take this from you |
Thats a great poem, u seem like your really strong. Keep writing, your poems are great, |
by Bridget
Good on ya that's really good and you seem like one tough cookie |
by *Charisma*
I think your poem is pretty good but it lacks a consistent rhyme scheme. That would be my one suggestion. Otherwise, keep writing! |