Thank you *editted*

by Nil   Dec 18, 2006


Please don't look at me
with love and care
I don't deserve any of it
to you, i haven't been fair

You've been there for me
Throughout my rough times
and you've talked me out
of wanting to end my life

When i was bleeding
you bandaged my wounds
repeating I'm so sorry
they will heal soon

I haven't been fair to you
I haven't given you my love
Not even a thanks
No gratitude to show..

Well Thank you so much
Even if you were partially why i cried
It means the world to me
That you held my hand the entire time

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A touching poem....wish the last stanza rhymed like the rest, but it was truly sweet and I'm sure the recipient is grateful!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was so sad yet very sweet! You must have a wonderful friend!Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by catherine

    I really liked that. You showed a great sense of sorrow and used some really great rhymes. Well done 5/5