by Corruption Dec 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
There is a man who had his heart torn apart |
Wow keenan, we were totally bright and chipper when we wrote this little peice, now weren't we? lol. very pretty, a little dark, but i must admit, i liked it. i like how instead of how i usually write where the 2nd and 4th lines in a stanza are the connected rhytmic words, you put it as te 1st and 3rd lines, it gives the poem a different kind of flow, i loved it. good job! |
by WordsHurt
OMG! OMG OMG! Thats so fvckin good! |