Its ok but it could have been so much more

This isn't really a poem--just a quote.

I still really like it though; it's extremely true. =)

I liked this, but like others before me have siad, it should be a quote rather then a poem. Make it as a quote, i regulary read quotes, i know a few people do.
If you want to make it into a poem, just add a bit more, if you dont want it that long, then just add a few lines, make it a short poem. i write short poems sometimes.
Take care
xx
P.S I hope you dont think im nasty or anything, i did like it!

Sry to say this is more or less a quote than a poem, but i do agree with it all the same

Completely true, but i would put this as one of your quotes... good job