Rain

by Corruption   Dec 18, 2006


Rain drips down your body
like you are an extension of its beauty
when I'm with you I'm not a nobody
I'm someone special
i feel the love u give to me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    It is of interest to note how the woman's body serves as an 'extension' to the rain's beauty. In my mind's eye, well, it seems quite dreamy and nostalgic. Hm. Perhaps it was just me, though. I don't know.

    I liked the idea of a feeling of warmth and wholeness within oneself when one falls in love. Like I've said, it's a wonderful feeling. Is it not? :) You've penned a short poem which encompasses so much thoughts and meanings. At least I grasped lots of impressions by reading it. :] Nice one.

  • 17 years ago

    by simply crissyboo

    Aawww! keenan! who's the lucky girl? jk lol. anyways, ditto to whatthey said, short but very sweet. love it
    xo~Crissy

  • 17 years ago

    by raven147

    Short en cute..I loove the 1st 2 lines!

  • 17 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Awww! How sweet!
    Course you're special! Evreyone is special..specially me! lol joking!
    Im angry with you as well! U havent talked 2 me!-sobs-But tis ok!
    And i havent seen u in the club 4 LOOONGG! where have you been? Don't you miss us? -sobs again-
    Well i hope you come back sooN!
    Btw Great poem! Shrot but C.U.T.E!
    Loved it as always!

    Take Care
    `*-Luv Sux [moi new name!]