"When you walked into my heart
something found an unknown life.
When darkness seized my heart,
you've fixed what was black and white"

Gorgeous. Your words in this poem are beautiful, i especially loved that stanza, the images that you created in the mind were fantastic!
Well done hun
5/5
*Gem*

You did a great job. You really pulled it off, this poem. Your rhyming was Amazing! and the beat of the poem when smooth. I really liked your 2nd, 3rd, and 4th stanza. Awesome vocab. Amazing wording. I loved it!

5/5

Wow another wonderfully written peice of poetry. Great Job!! I loved it. The flow and structrue were great as well as your rhymes. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Nice poem again, normally I’m not into love poems but I will make an exception for this one. ;) Nice flow, rhyme and a good poem overall.
Nothing can mend what you gave. Lovely sentence.
5/5

Wow I loved this poem it really touched my heart! keep em comin and I'll keep the rate of 5/5 comin your way! Your an amazing writer!

I like this! Well written and i can relate to it!
I love reading poems i can relate to!
xoxo-am

I love this poem! I think its really great too. Sounds so much like what happened to me... 5/5

~Shae

Wow, i really love this poem,
great meaning
great flow
great word chice
and
great style.

congrates you have done a wonderful job, keep it up.

This is an AMAZING poem. When i was reading it, it made me think of my boyfriend and it really reminded me of him. Keep up the good work!

I love this poem, it really was a nice poem, and i know exactly what you're talking about. beautiful job, you really conveyed what you were trying to say well... great job, flow was great, vocab good, and it was heartfelt 5/5

Loved this one, the ending was great, you are truely a talened poet. 5/5!!! keep it up!!!!

Wow, great poem, awesome rhyming and flow... it was really enjoyable to read, and captured my attention to the last word 5/5 from me

The wrods that you used where wonderfull, your truely talented, keep it up!!!! oxoxoxo :) choi!

This is so beautifully written.

Great indeed
5/5

This is really cute...and true in so many ways!

K normaly i'd think this is cheezy but somehow u pulled it off
nis job
byeziz

Awwwh I enjoyed this, I thought it was really sweet and well written.
I enjoyed the imagery you used.
Ignore the downvoters, they obviously have nothing better to do.

This poem was very well written...I can relate to it easily...good job! ^_^