Wow you wrote a poem and i like it, and i can't wait to read more of them. |
by Freddie
I luved it! Im going to add u 2 my favs! |
by Lutu
Even though it was sad it sounded cute some how :) Very good! :) |
by cong
You are a good writer but its sad that all your poems are sad ones |
by claire
Wow - this was a really good poem. I'm a pretty happy person, but this poem was so well written that I can totally see how you feel. |
Yeah wow major meaning i really like this. good job keep writing and yeah. |
by fakesmile
Wow! i was moved man.. i felt every meaning of the word.. 5/5 |
by Madison
Reminds me of my last years living with my parents |
I m jus a kid... wat a poem this is.... fantastic one.. |
Very moving poem and something i can relate to now even thought i'm 21, i find myself connecting this to a song by simple plan called i'm just a kid if you havn't heard it check it out i think u'll relate to it. Wonderfully written, hope life improves for you, keep up the fantastic writing. 5/5 |
This poem is truelly unique....this is something i myself can relate to...very emotion and meaningful it like no matter how hard we try we cant match up to their standards like me i try and try for the ppl i love but in the end they dont appricate it but i love this poem short but meaningful short but it says a thousand words keep up the good work 5/5 |
by P00ki3B3ar
Your poems bring so much emotion its like I can feel it and they want to bring tears to my eyes! 5/5 |