Comments : The blue walls are high and the black troughs are low

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    What deep meaning this poem has! It really moved me and I loved how you ended it!! It leaves me just thinking "WOW"

    ^Just as the sea is oblivious to all of its doings, we are unknowing to life until we experience it.

    xxBonniexx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    LOVE IT!!!! this is really good, like freakishly good (thts a good thing)
    Thnx for the comments, ill talk to u about them l8er...

    *Shorty*
    :P