Sitting Here Wondering

by Ashley   Dec 18, 2006


As I sit here, I'm just wondering if you know. I get the filling, that you're not willing to accept. Your sitting there in disbelief, even feeling grief. just wondering why i like you, yet you cant see its because your nice, i know you wouldn't even think of hurting mice, your smart, and most of all your y;you're;r ;ow;n person. I wish you knew this is why i seem to find you so attractive, but not reactive, to my feelings. so as i sit here in disbelief that you know i really feel a sort of grief. so i guess ill continue to sit and keep wondering if you know or if you will ever know. Don't worry I'm not going to tell my story, ill just continue wondering like you.

~*Don't know if its a poem or just thoughts so please tell me what your think. Leave comments and vote i will do the same thing for you.*~

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  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

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  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Make a summary, pick out the points. Separate your points, within few lines. Introduce suspense, if you can. Save your narratives, create appeal. I know with these, you'll do better. Keep inking till you're done thinking. Continuity brings perfection.