You and Me against The World (Mirrored Refrain)

by Gem   Dec 18, 2006


All I need is to feel your touch
And I take a trip up to cloud nine
It's you and me against the world
I'm going to love you for all time

Your kiss sends shivers down my spine
Causes my heart to give a twirl
I'm going to love you for all time
It's you and me against the world

A relationship built on true love
I am yours and you are mine
It's you and me against the world
I'm going to love you for all time

I've found my soul mate for this life
I have to be the luckiest girl
I'm going to love you for all time
It's you and me against the world

I love you more than words can say
And so here ends my little rhyme...
It's you and me against the world
I'm going to love you for all time ©

*Gem*

Mirrored Refrain -
The Mirrored Refrain is rhyming verse form constructed by Stephanie Repnyek. The poem is formed by three or more quatrains where two lines within the quatrain are the "mirrored refrain" or alternating refrain. The rhyme scheme is as follows: xaBA, xbAB, xaBA, xbAB, etc.. x represents the only lines that do not rhyme within the poem. A and B represent the refrain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very unique rhyme scheme, i really hvnt read anything like this, are u having any book with all these different patterns??.. :o)

    Beautifully done
    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Nice job, I may try one like this. It sounds interesting. Good job!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was really beautiful, Gem. I totally get where you're coming from and it was an amazing write. So simple and yet had so much meaning. Thanks for the enjoyable read! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    This is fantastic and the setup was very cute! As you already know I can relate to it! & I'm so glad that you and Marcus did the same thing, I thought I was the only one who was smart enough to give my heart away so quickly..I mean, I didn't want anyone else to get him......Thanks for all the comments and support! This poem is great and the flow was really good!
    xoxo

    P.S. Thanks for everything

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl great job on this poem! very well written keep em coming. xx

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