I found this poem really awesome. Especially with the repetition of "It's you and me against the world" Sounds very rebellious. Its got a kind of Bonnie&Clyde feel to it. I think i'll have to give this rhyming verse form Mirrored Refrain a go = ]
xxBonnie

Wow you are good Gem! I am still in awe of your writing ability! Excellent!

Hey darl great job on this poem! very well written keep em coming. xx

This is fantastic and the setup was very cute! As you already know I can relate to it! & I'm so glad that you and Marcus did the same thing, I thought I was the only one who was smart enough to give my heart away so quickly..I mean, I didn't want anyone else to get him......Thanks for all the comments and support! This poem is great and the flow was really good!
xoxo

P.S. Thanks for everything

That was really beautiful, Gem. I totally get where you're coming from and it was an amazing write. So simple and yet had so much meaning. Thanks for the enjoyable read! :)
~Midnight Sun

Nice job, I may try one like this. It sounds interesting. Good job!
Charisma*

Very unique rhyme scheme, i really hvnt read anything like this, are u having any book with all these different patterns??.. :o)

Beautifully done
all the best and take care