Silly Brit

no problem Jordan, I wasn't mad..but thanks for sayin that anyway!! Take Care, Luv Michelle :)

GREAT POEM SO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK UP MICHELLE BECAUSE YOU HAVE A TRUE TALENT IN WRITING POETRY AND YOU SHOULD NEVER STOP BECAUSE I REALLY ENJOY READING YOUR POEMS AND I AM POSITIVELY SURE THAT MANY OTHER PEOPLE DO TO. SO KEEP ON WRITING THOSE POEMS THAT YOU WRITE SO WELL AND I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR WORK.
KEEP WRITING AND NEVER STOP DREAMING BIG!
LOVE ALWAYS,
~RACHEL~

And Jordan you are most certainly entitled to it, since I'm in love I dont much care! Thanks for your comment! Michelle :) and to the rest of you as well..:)

sorry that should be M.S. how clumsy of me to mispell something as trivial and insignificant as your name!!!!

Twitish/gitish Yank!!
and you M.C have quietly crept into my thoughts too, like some occupying invasion force entrenching and fortifying its position. Any pocket of resistance that had held up under the overwhelming odds has thrown down their arms and are now waving a white flag.
a burning inferno! how aptly put my sweet friend, like a wild uncontrolable fire ravaging everything in its path, laying waste to all the weeds of doubt and fear and buring away any trivial unrelated thought. Whatever happens in the future (j/k haha u cant give me that look!!) isnt it so deliciously delightful when two people feel exactly the same thing about each other. how the colours of life become more vivid and vibrant, how the morning bird`s songs sound more alive, as if they are singing jus for you.
always miss you too when apart. sometimes think it strange how two people can miss each other when having never met, always far over the horizon from each other, but who cares! we do miss each other and thats that. im sure some future technology will bring with it even more strange/bizzare opportunitys for two leaning hearts to discover each other.
Me perfect? awww shucks, sadly thats not true as im sure u will no doubt find out sooner or later, but thanx anyway babe. `i dnt care what anyone thinks...we know what is real`. well thats love for you babe, being intoxicated by anothers soul. when happiness tastes this sweet other peoples objections lose all of their sting and become a empty hollow noise.
`my northern star` love that line, like a person has become a true direction to follow, guiding you through all the bullsh*t of everyday life, an unchanging point of reference to follow, rely and depend on. great poetry.
i hope too that distance is no problem, i mean why should location make any difference at all and reading yr lines sounds so comforting under the present situation, will remember that line.
This is wonderful poetry SY.M.M!, clear emotions/desires leave the reader in no doubt how you are currently feeling. The happiness, fears, yearnings and incompleteness that the present situations brings are beautifuly articulated and do perfect justice to these cruel circumstances we both find ourselves in.
Love the footnote too, exactly my philosophy on life `you only live once`. hundred years from now we will all be dust, our turn at life forever gone, so why worry about decisions and choices. whats the worst that can happen? cant be any worse than it is now. lovely verse mich, never stop writing, u are the best, you got talet, you rock, etc etc etc and much more!!! Gonna give it a 5 but only if you pay for the first breakfast at barbs. deal? xxx
p.s wots a colorado?