A mixed sence of emotions, lots of pain and loss yet longing for hope where there isint any, i can relate therefore i loved it :) i know where you are going :) loved the poem :)) greta work :))

This is a very sad but a good poem, I feel exactly like that but over the weekend I caught my ex with some ugly girl, and I feel worse but in a way a little better cause now I don't have to be wondering I already know what hes about. I wrote a poem about it you should read it I think it came out good. But anyways this poem was really good and it sucks to feel like this but you can never understand the actions of some men. Take care talk to you later.5/5

I love it! It"s exactly how i feel! you're a real poet!

I agree with Hellon. Total raw emotion in this poem...
The poems written the most random jumble of thoughts turn out to be the real pieces of art in the end..
Well done on this.. I hope it;s not true for you =(
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*Gem*

Wow! that has so much emotion in it! keep it up!

Wow, thts exactly how i felt... tht actually made me really sad, oh well, i really like it!! keep it up!

*Shawte*