Tears

by Landi Cordier   Dec 18, 2006


My tears have never come this easy.
I have never been so sad.
i want to find my Daddy,
and i want to hold His hand,
i feel like I've been letting go,
i have the need to die.
I want to be forsaken,
why do I feel like i would never rhyme.

From where is my loneliness,
this emptiness inside?
Did He let my hand go
or is He holding strong?
where is every one that loves me,
or is there simply none?

why were i born,
why cant i just die?
Daddy come and take me home,
to the place that i belong!
Daddy i need you,
please just stay near.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    A very sad poem. Very, very sad. I felt as if it was coming from your heart. It feels like your heart is ripping from you while you are writing this. Great writing. 5/5, Keep up the great work!!.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    I can't really understand this poem, never liked my father very much. Nevertheless, well writin, very good poem. oxoxoxoxo :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Great poem Narcissa, capitalize the (I's), other than that its perfect, 5/5!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by steve

    I like the rhythem but the last line in the first stanza kinda through it off, the poem is good though, wheres home S. Africa or somewhere else???

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    I luv ur style, keep writing! ur realli gud!

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