Didn't listen

* Flow was off in this one and it seems like it should be a little longer. It is a subject full of emotion here you have to write about. Poetry is a good outlet for emotion, use that to improve this piece. I still give you a good score though :)

5/5. Oh Wow. Such a heart felt poem~ Keep up the GREAT work!~

* eh.. this poem is alright.. not my favorite.. its not very strong in emoition or anything.. its seems kind of like your talking to your friend about your boy issue.. there's nothing poetic about it..

I had the exact same thing happen but it was her who made me wait for nothing