Goodbye

by Landi Cordier   Dec 18, 2006


I wanted badly to make you proud
but even more i wanted to see you cry
i wanted you to hurt as i did
i wanted you to die
i wanted you to long for me
but now i say goodbye

*plz comment/vote*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    * There is a thin line between love and hate. You show that here.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    * Again, this is another short poem that doesnt have enough feelings put into it.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Again i forgot the * oops lol

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I really like this.. and its got great flow.. but i think its more of a quote than poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a very feeling write. Good job.