by Landi Cordier Dec 18, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
I wanted badly to make you proud |
by Rachel RTVW
* There is a thin line between love and hate. You show that here. |
* Again, this is another short poem that doesnt have enough feelings put into it. |
Again i forgot the * oops lol |
I really like this.. and its got great flow.. but i think its more of a quote than poem |
by Cindy
This is a very feeling write. Good job. |