Hidden

by Landi Cordier   Dec 18, 2006


Emotion hidden in my heart so deep,
all the secrets I have had to keep,
she loves you too, you know
and I know that she'll be the one you choose to love
But in the end I'll come out strong,
cause I'll be the one who's able to move on
I love you deep, and,
I love you strong,
and yet, I will be the one able to move on

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    * This is a cute short one. The repetition reinforces the message you are conveying in this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    * This is a better one of your short poems. A nice piece of work.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    * i like this a lot.. its cute.. and i like that it has a happy ending.. por positive ending.. its cute.. but i think the 4th line is a little too long and disrupts the flow

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