Ludicrous

by Landi Cordier   Dec 18, 2006


It started with a communication,
and it finished in an act,
you grasped my shoulder in your tender hand,
and i took your hand, tender as it was, in mine,
you cuddled it, and i liked the way your casing felt
you kissed me,
and ludicrous as i am, i returned the good deed
we played a game, you and i,
of brake and get broken down,
you ruined my heart, and i broke yours,
i presume we just weren't destined to be

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a beautifully written poem. I loved how everything flows together, the only thing is to capitalize when needed. 5/5