Gem, Beautiful! I really thought this one was really beautiful! I love the part, My heart is broken because of words spoken. Words can hurt us more than anything. Great job!

It is great to see you trying new types of poetry Gem. I have yet to try a Terzanelle and it interests me when I come across new types.

You made it look so easy yet upon reading how to go about writing one I was lost.......lol
Great job Gem ! A wonderful read indeed.

"They won't go away
I'm caught in this curse
They're here to stay
A heartbroken verse"

Beautiful words sweetie!I loved it! Even on a first attempt this is amazing! I love it!
xoxo

P.S. Guess what!!!

Hey hun i really liked this very well written great use of words. it was reallyg0od. keep em coming =) xx

A great first try, Not sure I could do it! lol
Charisma*

Thats great for a first attempt! well done!

I'm caught in this curse
They're here to stay
A heartbroken verse
Pours from my soul
I'm caught in this curse

these lines just made a very powerful impact on me...keep them coming

all the best and take care

Awesome job on this difficult form....but then, all your work is awesome!

Very heart felt....saddening 5/5