by intoxicated sorrows Dec 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She laid there cold and alone |
by Kaitlyn
You write really well.. this was really sad, and again emotional. you really know the right wrods to pick to convey a message, its great. |
by Freddie
I liked this poem! Its realli sad, u conveyed the message perfectly! well done! |
Very good poem and it is cute ow the guy is going to be with her is it just sad that they end their lives.... good job 5/5 |