SUICIDE NOTE

by intoxicated sorrows   Dec 18, 2006


She laid there cold and alone
with her suicide note gripped tight.
She couldn't hold on anymore
but she tried with all her might.

The crimson ran down her mouth
as the tears stained her pallid face.
She laid there weak and scared
as she faded away from this place.

He couldn't stop this destruction
couldn't stop what had occurred..
Rereading the note he grasped
Her suicide letter read these words.

" Baby, I'll always love you so
no matter what I'm about to do.
I need you to live in happiness
don't let deaths kiss reach you.

I'll remember your kisses
the way you made me smile.
I'll remember your words forever
please baby make your life worthwhile.

I'll be your guardian angel
walking with you hand in hand.
I'll be by your side forever more
I already have everything planned.

Just remember you were my everything
and baby there was nothing you could do.
Just remember I'll be beside you forever
and in that forever I'll always love you. "

He tried to keep strong for her
he tried to keep the smile on his face.
But he couldn't live in happiness
as the tears never left his face.

Now he lays there broken and torn
with his letter grasped in his hand.
He couldn't live without her gone
the path to happiness was banned.

His hair stuck on his face
from the tears that bleed.
As he once laid there gone
now he lays there dead.

By his side lays the note he wrote
to his love that lost her own race.
This is what the note had read
as the puzzle fits in its place..

" My love I couldn't fight anymore
this life I could no longer live.
I had no strength to go on baby
I had nothing more to give.

Please don't be disappointed in me
I tried my hardest to live without you.
But I finally found it to be forbidden
and in the end I know I needed you.

Without you by my side love
I felt so helpless and so alone.
Now I'm coming to be with you
cause baby I'm finally coming home."

Their graves now lay beside each other
together forever they will always be.
Death's love triangle now stands there
it rests between them now complete.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    You write really well.. this was really sad, and again emotional. you really know the right wrods to pick to convey a message, its great.
    kaitlynx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    I liked this poem! Its realli sad, u conveyed the message perfectly! well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    Very good poem and it is cute ow the guy is going to be with her is it just sad that they end their lives.... good job 5/5