Wow! Abolutly phenomenal job. This was a great poem. Well thought out. Exceptional! 5/5

Nice poem, very nicely written, keep it up.

Cool poem,. it reminded me of one of mine. i like how you use longer lines and each line rhymed within the stanza. it worked well. overall it flowed very well and the message was 'miscellaneous' but it was a cool poem. the only thing i can say about improvement is that this line- These times are the times when the lies come clean seemed too short.

x3Lauren

I really enjoyed this.
It was original and unique in concept and I really enjoyed the wording and imagery.
I thought you did a very good job.

This ones good... 5/5