Very well said. I liked the rhyme scheme. Keep up the great work!

Kimber this is really confusing...u might hate me for saying this but i've held my tonge for as long as i can...if u still love cody then how can u accept a promise ring from lance??

Kimber I really like it. I now you care about Cody, But itsd more of a brother sister bond. You daont want him to get hurt. And I know you TRUELY love Lance. Love ya tons Ashley