Gone away

by Rebecca   Dec 18, 2006


When you left me
you said i'd be fine
then u walked away
after our little "goodbye".

You said "let's be friends"
but its way too hard
not being close to you
is crushing me heart.

I'm not supposed to touch
or get to close
but how can i not
when it's you i want the most.

I'm trying to keep my distance,
but you're always on my mind
I'm gonna wait forever if i have to
until you are, yet again, mine.

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  • 17 years ago

    by simply crissyboo

    Great poem, but i would change one thing,

    "I'm not supposed to touch
    or get to close"

    i think i would change to,

    "I know i can't touch,
    and i can't get too close."

    but maybe not, that's just me i think it sounds fuller in a way. that's my advise. good poem though....4/5.
    love~Crissy

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