Her world will end

by Untitled   Dec 18, 2006


Days are dim
Life is cold
Horrifying stories
Left untold

Every day
Nothing's new
Same world,same pain,same story
Seen from a darkened veiw

Nothing left to live for
Nothing left but pain
Banished from the light
A penetrating scream of the insane

Solid to all feelings
Except the daggers of pain
Eyes puffy and red
And tear-stained

living in an evil world
Of evil games and evil schemeing
Her ears withered
From all the screaming

Doors slam
Chains rattle
Held hostage
Losing the battle

Tires screech
Dogs bark
Lights blink
Fire sparks

Ice cracks
Trees fall
One last tear
Completes the call

The hour is here
The clock strikes
Kids whine
And parents fight

Evil scents
Fill the air
Glass shatters
Through the cries of despair

The wind blows strong
The streets flood
Cuts are made
Here comes the blood

Rain pours
Lightning flashes
The ground parts
Thunder crashes

Limbs break
Rules bend
Cookies crumble
Her world will end

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiSa

    Wow very deep and compelling keep it up youll be a star!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by I will love you Forever and not a day less

    Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow.. that is an awesome poem.. I'm like speechless.. it was so full of such sad emotion, and I love the choice of words..the flow was great. I loved this stanza:

    Days are dim
    Life is cold
    Horrifying stories
    Left untold

    That spoke to me, it was wonderful. Thank you for the comment on my poem, it means a lot that you liked it!! 5/5!!
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    A very deep piece that is full of emotion. Images and feelings spring into being when your words are read. I particularly liked these lines

    Doors slam
    Chains rattle
    Held hostage
    Losing the battle

    Thank you so much for the comment. It is pleasing to know there are fellow poets near my age who are very good with words. Best wishes and blessed be. *5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    W-O-W!

    excellent! nice flow.

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