Thats gud. i lyk the way u tlk 2 cancer as if it is a person. well done!

Very well done. I hope your pain gets better soon. Cancer is a terrible thing. It robs so many lives. Well done

Personalising the disease is a great way to address the issues you have with it. Well done.

Ive lost so many ppl to cancer but i have a few who survived too... my cuz is fighting it as i type and knowing it... its takin a life... its a great poem and i kno it really hits home in me..
Good job