Im really speechless. This poem is filled with so much pain that there isnt really much to say. Im so sorry for your loss. Its brought tears to my eyes. No one should have to go through what you have. I hope that you can draw the strength to stay strong and know that a better tomorrow will come.
xxBonnie

Im sorry for what happend to you..im sure that you are a strong girl and will overcome all the bad things that come your way. beautiful poem...because it is real.

Omg chiq i thought that it was only a rumour that u had a baby... o well
i cant believe how much emotion and truth u can write... i think ur poems are AMAZING!!! dont stop, keep them coming and stay in touch.

luv Tash

I really like the way your put your feelings into this, it's amazing. But don't worry, as long as you keep looking up and forward, everything'll be ok. That guy was an ass and doesn't deserve you anyway.

5/5

Wow! this is such a sad and powerful poem. it literally brought tears to my eyes. the fact that it's true makse it all the more sad :[

Actually I can relate to this poem.. I had a boyfriend that I loved so much..and I did something stupid..and he left I went into a total break down trying to kill myself.. I didnt know my baby was there until it was too late. I lost mine. him and I are back together now. but I'll never have my baby. Your poems are amazing! and things will get better.. for both of us. :]

Idk much about writin but this was a great poem n that stories crazy but every1 makes mistakes u juss gotta learn from them but u musta been thru a lot keep writin thou

Damn .. i love it i really do and i kno too many people that have been thru the same thing i wana say i feel ur pain but i feel again at the same time that i can never feel the pain that u must feel so im not even gonna go there.. i dont get on here alot but when i do ill read on.. stay safe mama

Wow im soooo sorry for ur loss!!! it was a great poem!!! u have talent!! keep it up....and i read ur profile and im sorry ppl r so immature that they harrass u on here and ur right there here 4 the wrong reasons....u have talent so keep it up and keep ur head up high....thanx 4 the comment:-)

This poem was really really out there, relatable painful n very expressive, you truly have a talent, thank u for ure comment x

Bringing tears to my eyes, i can only say im deeply sry 4 tha pain u had 2 go thro.

Beautiful poem, the emotions are well expressed, the pain of it is shown throughout. keep up the good work.
sm:)e always.

Wow... great poem. Loved it!

Wow...just wow... i lost my baby due to misscarriage a few weeks ago and your poem.. wow .. its amazing

Wow, just amzing is so many ways, and did this actually happen to you, and if it did i am so sorry to hear that....but it was sucha a beautiful emotional poem..very good intro too

I thought you were my saviour,
my angle without wings
i brought you into my world
i made you my everything

amazing,.....tara

Awesome is what i can say cos i am speechless about the work and pray for the very best in your life. Rohan

Very touching.. really almost brought me to tears..
Regards Arun.

The word speechless could begin to describe what im feeling right now after experiencing that pain I feel you have most likely become a stronger person I'm deeply sorry you had to go through that even though i didnt cause it, you could be an inspiration to many young girls kudos nice write