I love the way u write u can really feel your emotios and u r very lucky to have a gd friend like that and i sure she lucky 2 have u 2. neway well dne it's very beautiful 5/5. Mazie X

This is really beautiful. I have some wonderful friends both female and male that I feel this way about. You did an excellent job of expressing the essence of a true friend. Good flow and rhyme...I enjoyed it.

This poem on friendship Is one of the best I have read! Friendships like these are rare. Excellent job on this.

Niiiceeee job. so beautiful. i can totally feel what you felt.

Erin :)

This is a very good poem, 5/5!!!!

"Miss the long talks about nothing but life
From happiness to hurt, stability to strife
The upsetting look when I have to leave
Really, I miss you when you're not next to me.

You're my best friend, and if it's more than great
But I'm happy you're here, for my hearts sake
I need someone to talk to who makes things okay
You do that for me, and I hope I do the same."
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^^ Loved those lines.
I just absolutely love this poem!! I can't even describe how much. I can relate to this in so many ways! This really hit home. I loved it!! Never stop writing! God Bless

-` Poetess

Your poems are so awesome!! i love all of them!! keep writing, cuz you're amazing!!

You write your emotions about your friend so well this poem made me tear up a little anyway friends are special to me too. keep it up!

Awehh what a cute friendship poem, this one really left me thinking. So often the words we leave unsaid are the ones that pain us most and so often the thoughts we push behind are the ones who will come back to haunt us. Lol, sorry..this poem really got me thinking deep lol, great job.

5.5
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