by *Charisma*
This poem was full of great questions and imagery. I just wished the last stanza flowed and rhymed like the rest. Here's my suggestion to make it follow the beauty of the poem you've penned (and this is just a suggestion, because your poem is amazing thus far) |
by Scaito
Its difficult to move on when there is no one who understands what you are going through. and the pieces to pick up are shattered too small. |
by Cindy
This is really a great write. Beautifuly done. |