Im not sure what to think of thsi poem, or what its trying to protray should I say, but it is besutifully written

This was pretty good
Granted there was some Simple Rhyme Use.
It was very well stated
and the emotions was very heartfelt
and for the true emotion and dedication
you get a 5
great job
MF~

Great poem. I like the idea in it. I think it's more a dark poem than a love one, though... anyways, you are a good writer and I'd love to see more.

~Amber