Sewn Together to be Torn Apart.

by Freddie   Dec 19, 2006


Please vote and comment Ive been really upset lately and haven't been able to write. I want to know what I can do to improve and whether or not I should quit while I'm head. Thanks.

I'm tearing at the seams,
I cant do this anymore,
My stitches are fraying,
As blood hits the floor,

I was sewn together
To be ripped back apart
Now I'm bleeding my soul
And losing my heart

I'm left praying to a god,
That doesn't exist,
And gripping onto a life,
That wont be missed,

I'm holding onto dreams
That wont come true
Holding on so I
Don't hurt you

But sometimes letting go
Is easier than having to hold on
And leaving here forever
Is easier than pretending you belong

Flyings just like falling,
Well, until you hit the ground,
So let me for-fill a broken dream,
Baby, you don't have to be around,

I hate to state the obvious
But your not holding my hand
You're trying to act like you know it all
But you just don't understand

If you cant show me that you love me,
If you cant stand by my side,
Don't bother coming to my funeral,
And when I die, don't be surprised.

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  • 17 years ago

    by tisha

    Its really good.... i think your an amazing writter... luvs your work
    ~tisha~

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    OMg if you dont have talent knowone does never stop writing that was flippen' awesome

    XOKaylaXO

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    That was amazing but really sad. your a great writer please don't stop.
    my favorite lines were

    "I'm left praying to a god,
    That doesn't exist,
    And gripping onto a life,
    That wont be missed"

    Don't worry, like you said to me things will get better.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Very sad poem but i thought it was brilliant, definately keep writing!! 5/5
    Leanne xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Molly

    For one never stop when you have the least little bit of talent.
    I thought this poem was great. YOur not as bad as you think.
    Keep it up.
    Molly
    5/5