That was really good!

So true.

LOVE IT!!!!! its so true!neways, its totally awesome!

*Shawte*

That was great!! i juz think u messed up on a line, it says

"This isn't real life, things are so great," i think u meant, "This isn't real life, things aren't so great," i might b wrong, but i kinda had trouble understanding that part, other than that it was great!! i loved it!! 5/5

I think it was good, you used some excellent wording and it had a fab flow
A lot of people on here will be able to relate to this =)
5/5
*Gem*

A very pessimistic way of looking at love... and so very true lol... This poem was written beautifully, I really enjoyed reading this... Well done 5/5 xx