Very nice. described how a knife feels on your wrist exactly.

I LOVE IT!!!!

Well, i gave you 4/5, i think that you should put more feelings in to your poems, other than that, your poems are pretty good. i hope that you can respect me telling you thins in a positive way, so that the next poem that you put in this site, can be felt more when people read them. keep up the good work.
Serenia