by Gem
Hehe, a lesson in a poem. |
Hm. As always, brilliant. Some of the best poems leave you speechless. Good job. |
Nice!!!!!!!! Poem and lesson! |
THAT'S A VERY CREATIVE WAY TO EXPLAIN IT. |
by Rachel RTVW
I thought the poem was well done. I don't know why it got voted down so low...maybe the people who gave you a low score don't understand formed peotry. It is difficult to follow the rules and have the poem make sense in this type of poetry.5/5 from me. |
by Heba
I really like it its a lesson in a poem, something learned in a fun way, good job:) |
Pity you didn't check the rhythm of the poem - because it doesn't flow very well... |