Comments : I Just Want...

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    That was beautiful! great job hun xx

  • 17 years ago

    by lisa

    Again an excellent poem well done xx

  • 17 years ago

    by e l flo

    Haha yay! gems gonna get married! yay! keep writing girl!

    Erin :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Your joy and happiness can really be felt in this poem! Excellent! Congrats!

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Awww....so sweet, i always enjoy poems that are true to life. So good job!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "I just want to tell you
    I love you more than life
    And I'm honoured to say
    Yes, I'll be your wife"

    I love this stanza, girl, you got a way with words! I can relate to it except for the wife part, I'm a little young, lol
    Great Job!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Awww i am really smiling now :)) that last bit
    "I just want to tell you
    I love you more than life
    And I'm honoured to say"
    is just pure love and deep down what ever guy wishes for :))
    Yes, I'll be your wife

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Waiting for the invitation eagerly.. ;o))

    May Gold Bless U Both

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    This is great Gem! good job, i love it

    ~rikki~

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    That was very sweet, great poem gem, 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by eleesha

    That is gawjuzz!!!
    Nice work!!
    Leeshy xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by megann anne

    Omgosh this was amazing! its like the cutest poem i have ever heard! it makes me excited for you!