by Cassie Dec 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The sun went down and now you're blind |
by Hayley Bird
Wow. Damn. Jeez. Lol this is like really good. I love the way you put the poem together too. The stanzas were constant through the whole thing so it was easy to read. I really like the way you get your feelings across. The was you use certain words, it really brings out your feelings. Keep writing, and 5/5 from me! |
by Brandi
Hey this is a really good poem keep writing |