Comments : Lust

  • 18 years ago

    by Brandi

    Hey this is a really good poem keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Bird

    Wow. Damn. Jeez. Lol this is like really good. I love the way you put the poem together too. The stanzas were constant through the whole thing so it was easy to read. I really like the way you get your feelings across. The was you use certain words, it really brings out your feelings. Keep writing, and 5/5 from me!

    Hayley