Awsome poem, keep writting :D

Wow, this was amazing. I'm sure alot of people can relate to this poem. You were very descriptive, and the rhymes flowed very well and did not seem forced at all, you are very talented.

--Steph

I loved your writing in this poem. everything flowed well together and it was amazing. i like how you used the entries in the journal to go back in time. 5/5