This is so beautiful..however did you write this?..my poems are nothing compared to this

definitly going on my fav list!

keep writing!

~shannon~

This is an outstanding poem. I don't know how you do you it. It expresses such deep emotion that noone else has the capability to indulge in. This is an outstandingly perfect poem. Beautiful yet sad. Excellent Job

Emily

10/5!!!! This poem was amazing. I totally loved it and it kind of made me sad. Keep it up. It was really really reallyx10 great.
Jenn

Haha, strange thought! I am beginning to wonder what you think about! haha, jk, that was an amazing poem, well done.

Wow, I love this poem. I know I've said it before, but wow. It is so sad, and the sadness just screams out at you when you're reading this. I love the way, it was written, the way it flows. It's amazing. Beautiful.

xx Trace

This idea was truly original and i liked this poem a lot. the poem seemed to be a challenge and really well put together. i think the "prelude" at the beginning was really effective as it seemed to come from an objective point of view. i also liked the two personas within this poem.

what an amazing demonstration of talent and skill.

Wow , amazing, it left me breathless....just simply amazing....no flaws, just perfect...

Great. It almost brung tears to my eyes. You got quite of an imagination!! Great write!! 5/5

This is probably one of the best& well-written poems I've ever read.
5/5 <3