I Remember When

by Rachel RTVW   Dec 19, 2006


I remember when you held me in your arms, so loving and so strong
I remember when you comforted me, when anything was wrong
I remember the feeling that I had, when looking in your eyes
I remember when we didn't agree, we always compromised
I remember saying I would love you, forever and a day
I remember when I left, after you asked me to please stay
I remember never loving someone, the way I once loved you
When I said I'd always love you, that part remains so true
I've missed your love every day, since we've been apart
I need you back so I can have, the other pieces of my heart

*This is a really old one*

Copyright©2006 Rachel Barnett

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  • 17 years ago

    by Barry

    Mmmmm 5
    might be an old one but still runs well
    sad poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    That's beautiful... i can relate, i know the feeling. i think u did a great job on this. i luv all of your poems, you're very talented!

    *Shawte*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, it is one of my favourite poems on the site.
    So sad, but beautifully written and something I can relate to.
    The flow and rhyme scheme worked very well, and the wording was a pleasure to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely!
    I loved it!
    Sweet message!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful poem. They say we don't know what we had till it is gone! Great job!

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