This is got to be one of the darkest deepest descriptive poems ive ever read. It really left me speechless. But I enjoyed reading it, even though im not a fan of cutting poems. Awesome write. Thanx for your comments.
xxBonnie

Although I am not a fan of cutting poems, [i have written one], I love the descriptive way you wrote this. The imagery and the thoughts left in my mind, lingers. Well done.

Jeannie