This is so sad! I hope things get better for you and your family. you are in my prayers. I hope the writing helps.

What an absolutely gut wrenching poem. I love the repeated use of "the dear Mr Killer " line. Somehow it really brings home the feelings of loss and pain and anger. I am so sorry this has happened.

Omg i cant tell you how amazing this poem is, so so good well done, i think you did a great job and definatly a 5/5 from me!! keep writing xx