by Landi Cordier Dec 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Sometimes we take chances, |
I like thiis-I can relate to the love and emnotion and also the substance abuse.It is simply stated yet emotional and honest, and a good rhyme scheme and flow.. |
by steve
I think it had great emotion, the flow was pretty good but the last lines of each stanza were longer than the others in the stanza, i still think it flowed pretty good though |