Wow, that was excellent! I loved your descriptions! Great poem!
i loved it!

This is a really good poem. great job!

I loved this poem. Its sad though... Keep on writing!! And I'll keep reading!

~Shae

Ha HA i forgot to COMMENT!!! XD

lol. i think yyou already know that your better then me in every possible way but I'm just gonnma rub it in a bit more! Excellente my fellow poet. Keep crackin'!
~Em
MWAH! XXOO

*quad hug*

Wow. your writing is just so deep and strong. your wording makes your poems spectacular. keep it up.

Amazing! Such an insightful poem... The flow of words and depths of emotions expressed were nicely written...

An amazing read...

Bueatiful. You seem to paint a canvas with your words and that is truly a talent. There is a depth to this poem as well that seems to be unique as it is relatable. Great job.