Hmm. I liked it. I thought you did a great job writing it. The flow was pretty good. Ehm. It makes sense. So I can't complain and you didn't lose me. :]

Wow, i really can relate to this, very nicely written.

That was really well written. I was looking at my favorites and wondering why I added those who did. When I read this poem I remembered why. Keep up your beautiful work.

I loved this.
The last line really caught my attention.
I enjoyed the imagery in this, it was beautiful.
I think you did a wonderful job.

Awesome right. Nice flow

5/5
~Stephen White