Comments : The End Of Us

  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    Hey! nice poem! the flow of the words are really deep..

    Hoping for a new breath
    Nothing seems so real
    Crave my name on your heart
    I never let you touch the knife!

    this stanza is really amazing.. Keep writing!!

  • 17 years ago

    by mier

    Oi! haha... great poem!! haven't read it before though... haha!! how cum only one poem?? are u talking about e.p?? anyway, love this poem..