Comments : Once Again

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Awesome! I loved it! I can't seem to write (find inspiration) these days... It's very annoying, actually. But that's neither here nor there. Great poem! Keep up the good work!

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  • 17 years ago

    by emptysole

    Great work hope things go well for u

  • 17 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Great poem!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I love it. u have a way with words that makes me feel like u mean this truely from the deepest part of ur heart. may ur life be filled with happiness

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    5/5. its a beautiful poem. it makes ur emotions clear and the reason why u feel that way.

  • Great poem. A lot of emotion was put into it. Good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Wow lovely poem. It flowed very nicely.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Relateable.
    Could use some puctuation,
    It'd help with the flow,

    Maybe add some imagery, because its sightly generic, I don't mean to be rude at all. Its good poem, but you can always improve.

    Thanks for the comment, I wish you the best as well. Nice write, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by min

    Great write!!! i like how u arent afraid to express urself. . .about anything! keep it up!

  • Scott!!!
    This is a great poem you expressed yourself so clearly with nothing holding your feelings back thats what i like about you you dont hold anything back so keep up the good work!!!
    -lenise

  • 17 years ago

    by jolene

    *Beautiful*