Inmortal

I completely agree with that last stanza.
and this was an outstandingly amazing poem .
it was short, but had so much emotion
and passion within it. 5/5.

I really love the ending. That last line "done with" doesn't really fit, but it completes the poem. It makes you stop and think, just where you need to.

This poem can go on
and never meet its end
as a human continue breathing
life's torture still isn't
done with

Whoa!! these words are beautiful... i wish i could give you more than 5/5..

Even Imortality is something one can get used to, but the pain of a broken heart is something we can never forget :( the poem was beautifull :))