Even Imortality is something one can get used to, but the pain of a broken heart is something we can never forget :( the poem was beautifull :))

This poem can go on
and never meet its end
as a human continue breathing
life's torture still isn't
done with

Whoa!! these words are beautiful... i wish i could give you more than 5/5..

I really love the ending. That last line "done with" doesn't really fit, but it completes the poem. It makes you stop and think, just where you need to.

I completely agree with that last stanza.
and this was an outstandingly amazing poem .
it was short, but had so much emotion
and passion within it. 5/5.