BROKE MY HEART***

by Tiffani n Arial   Dec 19, 2006


You broke my heart, made me cry, you went out the door without a goodbye, i thought you loved me, and i thought it was true, but you broke my heart and now were threw

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Again you spelt through wrong... the threw you are using are like.. "I threw the ball" This through is like "We are through"

    You broke my heart,
    And made me cry.
    You went out the door,
    Without a goodbye.

    I thought you loved me,
    I thought it was true.
    But you broke my heart,
    And now we're through.

    Just set it up like a poem, and that will help, what you posted looks like a bunch of lines that rhyme, don't forget to use Capitialization, and puncuation, it makes it look like you spent time and effort into producing it.

    Good Poem

    5/5